Tuesday, December 6, 2011

New Poetry : December 6, 2011

Been thinking about all the winds they've been having back in my hometown.  Here's my take:

An Ode to Santa Anna Winds

Petulant, angry gusts
that shove across
the desert floor,
whooshing,
howling,
dry as flint,
hot as tumbleweed cinder,
filling the night
with piercing cacophonies
of sleepless song,
stunning the silence
of a starless sky,
loud,
jarring,
running through nothingness
straight to walls and windows
passin’ through
on the way
to ocean’s end.

3 comments:

  1. Cindy, this is stunning. I feel like I'm living this today (cold and windy in the desert). Beautiful.

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  2. I agree with Ryan. This sums it up beautifully! Funny you mentioned onomatopoeia; we just had a discussion about those in a grade level meeting yesterday.

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  3. This is wonderful. Really beautiful. It feels authentic, and it is free of pretence.

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